Jodi
3/9/2014 01:59:30 am
Simon ,your poem was really well written. the imagery is good and you did a great job of capturing what it felt like to be in the Rain forest. You are a fantastic poet. Keep up the great work!
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Dad
3/9/2014 03:02:42 am
I enjoyed reading your poem. You used colourful language that made me feel like I was at the falls with you. You did a good job of describing what it is like to be there. What was the hardest part of writing this poem?
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simon
3/9/2014 10:20:29 pm
The hardest part was finding words that rhyme.
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